Angels' Dares
“Take me where you’re going,” he commands. “I want to go there, too.” I’m not really headed anywhere, but I’ll make something up for him. He’s the kind of guy for whom I don’t mind fictionalizing.
I’d been hiking through the rain, and I’m dripping on the floor now. Just inside the door and I need to lose a layer. He nods at me discreetly as the party blurs around him. I had told him not to cut his hair.
Halo snipped, he’s incandescent. And the fluttering in the mirror isn’t wings at all, nor robes of whisper-woven cloud. It’s the undulation of man-made fabric, women surrounding him, spinning their skirts ever so slightly to draw his attention, caressing their own necks in absentminded longing for his gaze, pretty pouty lips praying for the benediction of his eyes upon them. Listen closely; that’s the sound of panties falling.
Men like him are always surrounded by women. Like him? As in, men drawn to me and I to them. We fly to each other when flying means falling, and falling to flesh means approaching eden. And I’m not sure exactly what I meant by that except that taking him anywhere would result in lost clothes.
Always, they excuse themselves from their congregations to address me. They prefer not to be overheard when they breathe challenges into my ear, life-sparks into clay. A sculpture this one could mold with sure fingers should he synch their strokes devilishly with the flick of his tongue.
"To a museum. I am going to a museum."
"Are you coming?"
I’d been hiking through the rain, and I’m dripping on the floor now. Just inside the door and I need to lose a layer. He nods at me discreetly as the party blurs around him. I had told him not to cut his hair.
Halo snipped, he’s incandescent. And the fluttering in the mirror isn’t wings at all, nor robes of whisper-woven cloud. It’s the undulation of man-made fabric, women surrounding him, spinning their skirts ever so slightly to draw his attention, caressing their own necks in absentminded longing for his gaze, pretty pouty lips praying for the benediction of his eyes upon them. Listen closely; that’s the sound of panties falling.
Men like him are always surrounded by women. Like him? As in, men drawn to me and I to them. We fly to each other when flying means falling, and falling to flesh means approaching eden. And I’m not sure exactly what I meant by that except that taking him anywhere would result in lost clothes.
Always, they excuse themselves from their congregations to address me. They prefer not to be overheard when they breathe challenges into my ear, life-sparks into clay. A sculpture this one could mold with sure fingers should he synch their strokes devilishly with the flick of his tongue.
"To a museum. I am going to a museum."
"Are you coming?"
Labels: Angels' Dares, fiction, garden dream music metaphor



25 Comments:
This post is a keeper. It will be around for a while, I mean. I'm trying to say that it takes me places, that it will go places.
It's got legs. You know what I mean.
"Those belong in a museum!" - Indiana Jones.
Hello, Jill.
P.S.: I'm currently juggling a bowling pin, a wedding ring, an onion ring, two red herrings and Schrödinger's cat. Top that!
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scott, At
Wed Oct 11, 09:07:00 PM 2006
Girl! Your photograghy skills are blowing me away.
I'm dripping wet as well. But this post warmed me up. I would like to tell him, "Hello."
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Janet, At
Wed Oct 11, 09:13:00 PM 2006
Scott: a snare drum, a pair of cymbals, The Clash, and the Big Bang. I'm not quite sure how to grasp T = 0, but I think I hear London Calling.
Thanks, Janet! Who are you telling hello?
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Jill, At
Wed Oct 11, 09:28:00 PM 2006
Hi Jill,
Nice piece! It leaves you wanting more... Have you ever thought about creating fiction around your photogpraphs?
Later,
Andrew (aka Sandman5 from Flickr)
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Andrew, At
Wed Oct 11, 09:58:00 PM 2006
Hey, thanks for stopping by the blog! Actually, I had thought of it. Just today, in fact. So you think it turned out well?
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Jill, At
Wed Oct 11, 10:10:00 PM 2006
Yeah, the two (picture and text) complement each other.
Enjoying the blog so far (although a lot of catching up to do since I just arrived).
Also, rumor has it you cheat at air hockey... ;)
Later,
Andrew (Sandman5)
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Andrew, At
Wed Oct 11, 10:34:00 PM 2006
Well, Andrew, it's funny how inspiration happens sometimes. Sometimes, pictures bring words to mind and they just float around in there, swirling into other words you've heard or read, all bouncing off of other pictures, until they scream to be written.
Thanks for reading! Just check out the sidebar and see what appeals.
I have NEVER cheated at air hockey.
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Jill, At
Wed Oct 11, 10:42:00 PM 2006
ooh! ooh! i LOVE museums. and i bet the guy in this post doesn't really like museums at all. i bet he just wants to get out of the rain. which is also the opposite of how i feel about that sort of thing.
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ducklet, At
Thu Oct 12, 01:37:00 AM 2006
Good work Jill.
Keep it up.
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Keith, At
Thu Oct 12, 02:02:00 AM 2006
its been a while since I've read much creative writing and i missed the sculpture line and its relevance to you going to a museum. if he's that good of an artist, you'd want to see all of his...ahem..."work". metaphorically speaking that is.
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keith, At
Thu Oct 12, 02:10:00 AM 2006
I wonder what the curator will think...to find a pair of panties on the finger of the marble Adonis in the annexe?
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a fish on a bycicle, At
Thu Oct 12, 07:02:00 AM 2006
That, my dear, is one of those elusive creatures known as...
The perfect blog post.
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Peter DeWolf, At
Thu Oct 12, 07:07:00 AM 2006
Very eloquent, Jill, as usual :).
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ChickyBabe, At
Thu Oct 12, 08:19:00 AM 2006
Ok, Andrew and Bycicle get the honors for best comment. Both made me laugh out loud a little.
This guy sounds like someone I know. . . . except he knows you in person instead of me.
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Spaceman Spiff, At
Thu Oct 12, 10:22:00 AM 2006
Ducklet, since he's a fiction, you may imagine whomever you choose in his place. Maybe he does like museums. And rain.
Keith, angel, artist, would it matter to all the women swooning?
Whoa, Fish. That is one fantastic image. I wish that was the photo.
Oh, Peter, you flatter me!
Thanks, Chicky. Fallen angels only seem to understand if you talk to them with pretty words.
Spiffy, you read their comments, but not mine? Well, I said the post was fiction, but not necessarily the man? He's a fallen angel. And unfortunately, I haven't met any of those. For real. That I can prove, anyway.
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Jill, At
Thu Oct 12, 10:29:00 AM 2006
Jill, do you often find yourself lolling about, half-naked? Is this a new trend or an old habit? Can we look forward to more?
I have noticed a sublime trend in your photographic themes, darling Jill. I trend I would imagine all your male readers would like to nurture and coddle like a tiny, delicate seedling until it blossoms into something larger and more daring. Possibly, a few of your female readers might like that, too.
Oh, the story was nice as well. Lucky fictional guys get all the breaks.
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Network Geek, At
Thu Oct 12, 11:09:00 AM 2006
Photographically, this place is becoming my favorite non-softcore, softcore porn site. ;-)
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kapgar, At
Thu Oct 12, 11:21:00 AM 2006
Do I often find myself lolling about, half-naked? Now that I'm not fully employed, yes.
Old habit.
More? Probably.
Trend? Thanks to spending more time on Flickr, and seeing the cool stuff people are doing with their photography. I have time to do this because, once again, I'm not fully employed. I promised myself last year that if I wrote consistently for a full year and had established a solid writing practice that I could keep up, then I could spend more time pursuing photography as a hobby, as I've always wanted. So now I have begun. And as I had suspected, doing the 365 Days project has given me motivation and inspiration, as have all the Flickr-obsessed I have encountered through that group. And I really must acknowledge Sarah, whose photography has really been inspiring me recently.
Oh, and Kevin, my cousin just asked me the other night when I started "photographing burlesque".
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Jill, At
Thu Oct 12, 11:23:00 AM 2006
In my defense, I do not see anywhere where you specifically stated this was a fictional piece. I just thought you were taking the artistic liberty of, well, describing this guy in angellic terms. So he is John Travolta/Micheal no wait,he was on a mission of love, is he Nicholas Cage? Does he smell like cookie dough?
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Spaceman Spiff, At
Thu Oct 12, 12:51:00 PM 2006
Yes, you are correct. My usage of "it" could be interpreted to mean the post, but in my mind the "it" goes back to the previous "it", and that goes back to "creating fiction around [my] photographs", so technically my usage of "it" does not precisely stand in for "fiction", but that's how it worked in my brain.
So how come you can't read my mind?
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Jill, At
Thu Oct 12, 01:01:00 PM 2006
Darn. As hard as I try, I can never hear the sound of panties falling unless they go "Ka-Thump!" And THAT is not a good thing.
Sexy post, Jill.
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peefer, At
Thu Oct 12, 02:02:00 PM 2006
Yea! Horay for trends!
More sexy Jill pictures + More sexy Jill words = Happy Fanboy!
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Network Geek, At
Thu Oct 12, 02:16:00 PM 2006
I believe we have discussed the abstract thought concept before. I, fortunately, can not be quite that abstract. I can only pick up surface thoughts, not the deep inner workings of your brain. Give me time though. . . .
ok, I heard that. That was not altogether nice you know.
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Spaceman Spiff, At
Thu Oct 12, 02:25:00 PM 2006
No, I don't suppose that would be a good thing, Peefer. Unless it was the falling of a chastity belt?
Geek, glad to make you happy.
Sorry, Spiffy. I'l be more blatant in the future.
Heh. Who am I kidding? If I were blatant, I wouldn't... eh. Whatever.
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Jill, At
Fri Oct 13, 11:34:00 AM 2006
Whow!
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Miladysa, At
Sat Oct 14, 05:01:00 PM 2006
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