Wednesday, July 12, 2006

Meet Girl.

The birthdate of my new play would have to have been May 9th, when my three year old self took over and wrote Dramatis Personæ. It had been conceived earlier, and there had been quite a bit of pre-natal development. And then...

Ummm... let's just leave off the extended metaphor right there.

So, meet Girl. She is narrating the new play. Here's the opening. This is a voiceover narration.

Stage location (probably to be conveyed by just a few details and sound): Two beaches, half a world apart. A woman and a man are at opposite ends of the stage, staring off into the surf. The sounds of the ocean.


Girl
(Voiceover)
Once upon a time, there was a little girl. People thought she was a strange little girl because she seemed to talk to herself. She wasn’t really, of course. She was talking to her dolls. Paper dolls. The paper dolls had stories and the little girl had to tell them. In the stories, the paper dolls would go to far far away places. They would live in far far away places.

The little girl would take the paper dolls everywhere—the playground and the park and the beach. At the beach, the little girl would sit, and face the ocean, with her paper dolls all lined in a row next to her. And all together, they would watch the ocean. Watch the waves. And listen. Listen for stories about paper dolls who lived where the water ended. On the other side.

One day a paper doll, the newest and the prettiest, got caught up in the wind and landed in the waves. The little girl begged her mother to save the pretty doll, but her mother knew the truth. The doll had melted into the water and disappeared.

What the girl didn’t know, couldn’t know, was that on the other side of the world there was a boy. He did not play with paper dolls, of course, because boys do not do such things. The boy on the other side of the world told no such stories, but he made things with his hands—always something in his hands, something made to race or climb or float or fly. Especially airplanes. Airplanes made of paper. Such toys tell no tales. They don’t live long enough. For paper airplanes are made to fly out into the surf, as fast and far as possible, then glide into the waves and be gone.

Paper, it seems, is not made to cross the ocean.

11 Comments:

  • My. brain. hurts.

    By Blogger Jill, At Wed Jul 12, 04:41:00 PM 2006  

  • That was very cool. Is it safe to assume that at some point in the future the two children will grow up and happen to meet and swap tales of their love of origami american style? I love paper, it is crinkly and can be cool colors and comes in all kinds of sizes and textures. Big fan of paper. Though aparently paper is not made to cross over my lips and get into my mouth either. The waves don't get the paper, Mommy and Daddy do. One day when they aren't looking. . . .

    By Blogger lil'bitty, At Wed Jul 12, 05:01:00 PM 2006  

  • Yes, they will meet and swap tales. :)

    I love paper, too. But it really doesn't taste very good, so you're not missing much.

    By Blogger Jill, At Wed Jul 12, 05:23:00 PM 2006  

  • I sense a message very profound. So profound, in fact, that my head has also taken to hurting.

    By Blogger Shafa, At Wed Jul 12, 06:17:00 PM 2006  

  • I like this. It's too late in the day to give you an honest response to it...I'm SO tired...but just know I thought it was cool.

    I deleted my blog. (Idiot)
    So here's the new one
    revolving-girl.blogspot.com

    By Blogger Kiki, At Wed Jul 12, 06:29:00 PM 2006  

  • I can see them on stage and I can hear the ocean... hence I look forward to more.

    I'm also a girl who often lets voices converse in my head. As a child, I did it with Barbie dolls, now I do it with my characters. There's never any peace and quiet around them! :P

    By Blogger ChickyBabe, At Wed Jul 12, 09:54:00 PM 2006  

  • What happens next!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    By Blogger Brookelina, At Wed Jul 12, 11:07:00 PM 2006  

  • What actually happens to the paper in the ocean? Very lovely.

    By Blogger Elle, At Wed Jul 12, 11:46:00 PM 2006  

  • Gosh, no, Shafa! There's a whole play more to come!

    You deleted your blog?!?! Will visit your new digs asap, Kiki.

    Me too with the Barbie dolls, ChickyBabe. But in this case the paper dolls seemed to fit the theme.

    Well, Brooke, this adult version of her starts referring to all these bloggers, and tells an anecdote at one point about a girl named Brooke. What do you think? (No, not kidding.)

    The paper turns to mush, Elle. Much like my brain.

    By Blogger Jill, At Thu Jul 13, 12:31:00 AM 2006  

  • Hi Jill.

    This is terrific start to the play. I think, however, it is the last line that gets to me. That line holds infinite possibilities. Perhaps paper (or people) were never meant to cross oceans, or rivers or huge tracts of land, but it does (they do).

    I can't wait to see where this goes.

    By Blogger Momentary Academic, At Thu Jul 13, 11:00:00 AM 2006  

  • A youthful and hopeful start. I sense healthy tension and adventure, but I fear a sad ending. I just don't see the characters getting past the last line of your opening. But that's just me. I don't like getting my hopes too high.

    By Anonymous peefer, At Fri Jul 14, 03:13:00 PM 2006  

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