Pieces
You have pieces of me.
Objects that I have held, touched. Run my fingers over.
I imagine them--postcards and letters, envelopes and paperclips:
do they look different in your hands than they did in mine?
Are they worn now, edges smoothed, corners bent, your fingers rubbing and folding and creasing as your mind raced?
Or are the pages pristine, pressed carefully between your techno-gadgets, for fear you might destroy the fragile fibers, and by some symbolic voo-doo, all that they delivered?
You are tactile--the only thing you care not for in your hands, a pen.
Your words scrawled: a mere practicality.
My words delivered: an object for your hands alone. An amulet.
Loved inkless or preserved priceless?
Objects that I have held, touched. Run my fingers over.
I imagine them--postcards and letters, envelopes and paperclips:
do they look different in your hands than they did in mine?
Are they worn now, edges smoothed, corners bent, your fingers rubbing and folding and creasing as your mind raced?
Or are the pages pristine, pressed carefully between your techno-gadgets, for fear you might destroy the fragile fibers, and by some symbolic voo-doo, all that they delivered?
You are tactile--the only thing you care not for in your hands, a pen.
Your words scrawled: a mere practicality.
My words delivered: an object for your hands alone. An amulet.
Loved inkless or preserved priceless?
Labels: Longing may be elegant but it also hurts like hell, poesy, tactile


24 Comments:
Whoever this is has something precious of yours, indeed. Are they appreciating it?
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The Grunt, At
Thu May 04, 03:04:00 AM 2006
I'd like to think it's been carefully preserved as not to lose your touch.
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ChickyBabe, At
Thu May 04, 06:21:00 AM 2006
Grunt, my things have always been appreciated properly. It's just that sometimes I take the time to imagine their state of happiness in their new home.
That's most likely, CB, but I'd be okay with the other option as well.
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Jill, At
Thu May 04, 08:12:00 AM 2006
"You are tactile--the only thing you care not for in your hands, a pen."
This made me pick up a pen just to have something in my hands. Your words inspire me to tactility (is that a word?).
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Dustin, At
Thu May 04, 08:20:00 AM 2006
Ah, don't worry, we can make words up. I think that's what Brando's trying to do today as well. Let's just declare it MAKE A WORD UP IN THE COMMENTS DAY! If by make a word up in the comments day, I mean... hmmm.... make a word up. In the comments. What's that called again?
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Jill, At
Thu May 04, 08:35:00 AM 2006
EXACTLY. I care not for a pen in my hands, and by pen i mean notebook computer. And that's why I didn't respond to your email, because my words are a mere practicality, and by mere practicality i mean i passed out 2 seconds after posting to my blog.
By
ducklet, At
Thu May 04, 09:09:00 AM 2006
/wipes brow
Whew! I'm relieved!
If by relieved, I mean "going to eat breakfast."
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Jill, At
Thu May 04, 09:15:00 AM 2006
Good last question. For some reason, I think that being "Loved inkless" is the most compelling thing I've heard of in days. I can't explain why, of course.
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Momentary Academic, At
Thu May 04, 09:16:00 AM 2006
As much as I may visually prefer the "preserved priceless" option, there is just something to be said for an item that is "loved inkless."
What does the ink really matter? By the time it is truly inkless, the words will already be committed to memory to be replayed over and over and over again.
And as your eyes glance over the worn and wordless parchment, your mind and heart will still see the exact position where the letters once stood out as they burned their image into your memory.
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kapgar, At
Thu May 04, 09:35:00 AM 2006
Thanks, M.A.. I am rather fond of that phrase myself, though I try not to get too attached to my own words.
I agree, Kevin. And that's beautiful, the way you've expressed it.
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Jill, At
Thu May 04, 09:39:00 AM 2006
You have a new look here. I like.
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Thomas, At
Thu May 04, 12:04:00 PM 2006
I love that idea, thinking about who touches the things we have or once had. interesting stuff...
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Cheryl, At
Thu May 04, 02:54:00 PM 2006
I liked this post, and by liked I mean I enjoyed it.
No wait. I did that wrong, and by wrong I mean not wrong.
No, that's not really right either. Hmmm...
Hello, Jill.
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scott, At
Thu May 04, 03:34:00 PM 2006
You know, thinking about who has touched your things could be slightly unsettling too... stalkerish even.
Show and tell's gotten so much more complicated since kindergarten.
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matt, At
Thu May 04, 04:08:00 PM 2006
Beautiful. Strange that I read this today, just now. I just got an old letter in the mail and I felt like I was reading your words about it. We were thinking alike today.
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Megan, At
Thu May 04, 05:24:00 PM 2006
I have two sets, depending on the hand that wrote the lines...
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Faltenin, At
Thu May 04, 05:50:00 PM 2006
Thank you, Thomas.
It is interesting to ponder, isn't it, Cheryl?
Hello, Scott! And by Scott, I mean you.
Well, yes, Matt, if you look at it that way, it could get a bit weird.
Megan, you got an old letter in the mail? Hmmm... interesting.
And what makes the difference, Faltenin?
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Jill, At
Fri May 05, 12:14:00 AM 2006
That was beautiful, Jill.
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Jenna Howard, At
Fri May 05, 04:44:00 PM 2006
Thank you very much, Jenna. And thanks for the visit.
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Jill, At
Fri May 05, 04:47:00 PM 2006
That's some deep stuff there and I loved it! You know how to make a guy really think, that is for sure.
In my hands, sentimental keepsakes are gently loved/worn slightly, but forever preserved in a secret box...and kept safely in my heart.
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DIAMONDKT, At
Sun May 07, 09:52:00 PM 2006
I know how to make a guy really think? :) I shall take that as the highest compliment!
And I think "gently loved" is a great phrase for the occasion.
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Jill, At
Mon May 08, 12:18:00 AM 2006
beautiful.
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Cheetarah1980, At
Wed May 10, 12:47:00 PM 2006
thanks :)
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Jill, At
Wed May 10, 02:32:00 PM 2006
Loved inkless seems so pure and genuine and meaningful. But me? If I can't read it over and over and over, then my memomry gradually fades to grey. I need ink to remember. Or phone calls.
'Glad I found this old post. Thanks, Jill.
By
peefer, At
Thu Nov 02, 10:21:00 AM 2006
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