Cupcake
Or maybe you don't want to write it. Maybe you want to say it. You want to sit across the table from someone and swirl the frosting on. Sprinkle on some bits of sugar. Watch as the spring-hued sweets fall across the bed of icing, some of them toppling off onto the tablecloth. Then you'd take a step back and store it in your mind--the colors, the textures, the contrasts. Before you moisten the soft pad of your thumb, press it down onto the sprinkles, make them stick. Lift it to your mouth.
What you do next is up to you.
A mental snapshot... a tiny taste... pricelessly delicious teases.
But not a substitute for the whole thing.
Will you answer to "Cupcake"?
Labels: creative nonfiction, on writing, tactile, yummy stuff


32 Comments:
I was in the grocery store Monday, and when I walked past the bakery the smell of fresh baked cupcakes nearly knocked me off my feet. I wanted to eat one right then and there! It was like the last temptation of Chimmy, but somehow I found the resolve to walk away. I don't know if I could do that twice.
And, I answer to cupcake without the sprinkles. That is true...I work with a girl who calls me cupcake all the time.
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Lord Chimmy, At
3/23/2006 11:18:00 PM
I had a bag of kettle chips play footsie with me today. There's still time to unwrap them.
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The Grunt, At
3/24/2006 12:01:00 AM
"A mental snapshot... a tiny taste... pricelessly delicious teases.
But not a substitute for the whole thing."
The tantalising taste of sweetness, teasing the lips, temptation tugging at the edge of reason and desire...do you undergo the pleasured agony of denial, knowing that when you finally give in, the taste will be so much the sweeter for the waiting...or do indulge the simple hint of sweetness too much, and the heedy rush of need fills you and you feast, emptying your cravings and filling the void with sugared candy and frosting held high on the softest of sponge touch.
...Jill your not really talking about "Cupcakes" are you?
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Indiana, At
3/24/2006 01:17:00 AM
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ChickyBabe, At
3/24/2006 01:18:00 AM
I won't answer to "Cupcake", but I'll answer to a sticky date pudding. With it warm and soft texture, covered in the gooey sweetness of caramel that often drips and leaves you licking that little spot by your lips. Mmm...
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ChickyBabe, At
3/24/2006 01:24:00 AM
Next move with glob of icing on my finger? Lovingly touch partner-in-crime's nose.
In the next few minutes, the majority of the icing may end up in our hair, on our clothes...
May get around to actually eating them when the poor, former, masterpieces are all but recognizable.
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Janet, At
3/24/2006 01:45:00 AM
I need a cold shower after reading Janet and Chicky's comments.
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Egan, At
3/24/2006 02:06:00 AM
Yes...and sometimes, I want to write something which is completely the opposite of delicious. Acidic, bitter, cringe-inducing...and leaves a bad feeling in your stomach.
Um...wow. Crabby much today?!
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sandra, At
3/24/2006 02:19:00 AM
I know what you mean, but I can't get a girl to respond when I call her "sweaty vagina." And thank you, but the strippers of Vegas already reminded me just how badly I need to get laid.
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Claven, At
3/24/2006 04:01:00 AM
Jill, darling, for frosting and an extra $5, you can call me anything you want. I may be cheap, but I'm easy, too. Especially if there's frosting involved.
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Network Geek, At
3/24/2006 07:31:00 AM
seeing as how i'm going to soon be sitting across that table from you, what i answer to will have to remain secret. (thank god i'll be chaperoned)
i'm pretty sure it's not cupcake, though...
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ducklet, At
3/24/2006 09:39:00 AM
See your email. :)
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Kendra, At
3/24/2006 12:02:00 PM
I'll answer to many things, under the right conditions.
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-J, At
3/24/2006 01:51:00 PM
Sure, Cupcake
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Momentary Academic, At
3/24/2006 02:59:00 PM
I could do cupcake, or brownie. Now I am hungry...
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Cheryl, At
3/24/2006 04:25:00 PM
Sorry, folks. I've been running around all day. I hope you all helped yourselves to some cupcakes while I was out.
Lord Chimmy, it is so difficult to walk away from fresh baked goods.
I hope you and your kettle chips had a very satisfying evening together, Grunt.
Oh, Indiana, I think you know *exactly* what I'm talking about.
CB, I too will answer to sticky date pudding. There's not much I wouldn't do for sticky date pudding.
Janet: I like the way you think, girl!
We girls aim to please, Egan.
That's ok, Sandra. We can't be frosting and sprinkles all the time.
Wow, Claven, that's... uh... you've already been informed that you--right, yeah... um... yeah...
Extra $5, Geek? I'm not a woman who needs to pay for this sort of thing!
With or without a chaperone, Brando (I first accidentally typed Grando...will you answer to that?), I will figure out what you answer to. One word at a time.
Hmmm... Kendra, hon, did I miss something?
I can imagine what those conditions are, -J. ;)
Hey there, Cupcake!
And helllllooooo Brownie...
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Jill, At
3/24/2006 09:35:00 PM
I've always admired your imagination, Jill. :-)
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-J, At
3/24/2006 10:41:00 PM
Of course I'll answer to Cupcake...
I'll even treat you to one if you meet me for a cup o' Joe sometime.
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cupcakegrrl, At
3/24/2006 11:18:00 PM
Magnolia?
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Jill, At
3/24/2006 11:42:00 PM
Long time no comment, Jill.
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Thomas, At
3/24/2006 11:46:00 PM
Hi Thomas. I've commented at your blog! Where have you been? Moving, studying, testing, job-hunting...? ;)
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Jill, At
3/25/2006 12:06:00 AM
Yeah, see, where I come unstuck is that I don't actually want to write it, or say it, just eat it...
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anaglyph, At
3/25/2006 02:03:00 AM
No, Jill, I suppose you're not. Luckily, I'm used to not getting paid and answer to just about anything if the girl has frosting. That's why my butt is so wide and I've had to start exercising. Encroaching middle-age is hell.
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Network Geek, At
3/25/2006 07:26:00 AM
Hmmm. I might. Although I tend to believe answering to "loaded baked potato" would be more honest.
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Jennifer, At
3/25/2006 10:33:00 AM
I have no problem with you calling me cupcake.
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Brookelina, At
3/25/2006 09:41:00 PM
Umm, let's see... answer to "cupcake"... Well, "cupcake" I think you have some hidden issues that really need to be explored. That, and depending on your sugar-coated flavor, I'd like to make my way to your soft spongy interior. How's that for profound introspection?
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GC PHILO, At
3/26/2006 08:09:00 PM
Eating too many cupcakes can be a dangerous thing, Anaglyph.
Hey, Geek. Don't blame it on middle age. Just jog. And smile. You've got that fabulous new iPod now. Put it to good use.
A loaded baked potato sounds divine, Jennifer. Cheddar cheese, bacon, and sour cream on mine, ok? Thanks.
Glad you see it my way, Cupcake.
Profound, GC Philo? Sounds kind of naughty to me. ;)
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Jill, At
3/26/2006 08:52:00 PM
Now she tels me.
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anaglyph, At
3/27/2006 04:04:00 AM
whoops. sorry.
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Jill, At
3/27/2006 01:17:00 PM
i routinely answer to cupcake. but i'm fairly certain i'm not who you're talking about.
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kat, At
3/28/2006 09:02:00 PM
I'm not into pet names like cupcake, but I would be into spreading some icing and sprinkles on a great female body. Yum!
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DIAMONDKT, At
3/28/2006 10:46:00 PM
Kat: I love the fact that you have it on your cell phone.
Diamondkt: Gosh, that sounds like a brilliant idea!
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Jill, At
3/29/2006 12:11:00 AM
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