Tuesday, February 21, 2006

They meet.

This is a monologue I'm playing with for the play-in-progress. Damon is a DJ. (Which is why the photo of Moby's jeans was particularly suitable as his avatar in my brain.) Callie is a compulsive overthinker who can only find peace when running or dancing. (This character is not the least bit autobiographical. But before anyone asks--no, there is no DJ.) Callie speaks to the audience. Damon is onstage, but not interacting with her.

Callie
It's happened to all of you. I know it has. There you are, just minding your own business, doing whatever it is that you are doing, whatever it is that you do, you look up and... You don't expect it, you don't even necessarily want it, but there it is. Someone staring at you. Someone smiling at you. And you just can't help but stare back. It's like this person has some sort of hold over you. And no matter how hard you try, you can't turn away. Like in Star Wars, when the Millennium Falcon arrives in the Alderan system, only to find the planet obliterated, and Imperial fighter flying around what appears to be a small moon. Only it's NOT a small moon. It's the Death Star. But before Obi Wan realizes it, the ship is caught in a tractor beam and pulled inexorably toward--right, well, you get the picture. There's no escape.

* * * * * *

Let me take you back. I avoided him the first night, and then most of the next time I saw him--the next week. I always make it a point of making friends with the DJ. Sometimes they're interesting. Sometimes they're assholes. But this time, I killed my normal routine. I fully planned on continuing to avoid him. But he caught me by surprise.

I thought I could get by him. Sneak by under the radar. No. He was just standing there, his hands on the table, leaning forward, looking out over the crowd, thinking I don't know what. I was thinking "Damn, those are some well-defined arms. Wonder what those feel like." Seriously. Will you look at those forearms? But...uh...whatever he was thinking, it wasn't cocky. There was a big crowd, they were all into it, but he wasn't standing there thinking "This is all about me." He's not like that.

Anyway, I figured I could get by him quickly. I pried my eyes away from... those arms... and he was looking. Caught-cha lookin'! Well, I guess he caught me, too. But he was gracious about it, not like those losers who fix you with the death stare--they try to be all hard and manly. They never smile. Damon, he smiled. He was in. Exactly what I was avoiding.

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21 Comments:

  • I like the way Callie thinks, especially the first part of the monologue. I've been there. I've experienced that pull that takes control of you, yet you're still in control.

    I'd love to read that play when it's finished, Jill. Gripping as ever!

    By Blogger ChickyBabe, At 2/22/2006 12:16:00 AM  

  • Jill where can we get to see the plays you've written?

    I love the Star Wars analogy to the Tractor Beam..we think we are in control but we so are not.

    By Blogger Indiana, At 2/22/2006 01:29:00 AM  

  • For some reason, Callie has a London accent. At least when I read it, she does. I'm not sure why.

    By Blogger Momentary Academic, At 2/22/2006 07:12:00 AM  

  • Sure, CB. I'll bring it when I come to Sydney. ;)

    Well, Indiana, I had a full-length in a festival, and a bunch of 10 minute plays in some shows, but I have not had any productions lately because I've been working on this play and a few other things. I have so many things I want to write, and revise, and send places... I think I'm giving myself a headache.

    M.A., didn't you study in England?

    By Blogger Jill, At 2/22/2006 12:23:00 PM  

  • M.A., now you've got me imagining Kate Beckinsale. The war between the vampires and the lycans... ok, maybe I watch too many sci-fi/fantasy movies.

    By Blogger Jill, At 2/22/2006 12:28:00 PM  

  • I like the way Callie thinks, especially the first part of the monologue. I've been there. I've experienced that pull that takes control of you, yet you're still in control.

    I'd love to read that play when it's finished, Jill. Gripping as ever! As you can see, I second what ChickyBabe has to say.

    Star Wars? Were those the movies that came out in the 70's and 80's and had three really bad prequel movies? Great tie-in. I had to use the force not to get sucked in.

    By Blogger Egan, At 2/22/2006 12:45:00 PM  

  • Jill, I did study in England for a little while. And she just seems English to me. It could even be Kate B.

    By Blogger Momentary Academic, At 2/22/2006 01:07:00 PM  

  • Yes, Egan. That was they. That is they. The prequels are a case study in suckitude.

    MA, I like Kate B! :)

    By Blogger Jill, At 2/22/2006 01:17:00 PM  

  • Sorry, Chicky's voice was in my head.

    By Blogger Egan, At 2/22/2006 03:46:00 PM  

  • Egan, mon cher, are you playing with my mind? Or is that a hint for me to do an audio post? ;)

    By Blogger ChickyBabe, At 2/22/2006 06:55:00 PM  

  • I love this monologue Jill...

    can't wait to hear more from this play

    By Blogger Nurse M, At 2/22/2006 07:09:00 PM  

  • Oh wow! I so want to know what happens next. I would love to see this play out.

    By Blogger Cheryl, At 2/22/2006 07:24:00 PM  

  • ChickyBabe, you said it... not me. I did an audio post for you and Jill. I'm good like that. I know how the two of you like a good audio perve.

    By Blogger Egan, At 2/22/2006 07:45:00 PM  

  • Sounds like a pretty good work in progress. i hope we get to see more :O)

    By Blogger Chief Slacker, At 2/22/2006 08:18:00 PM  

  • Egan, have you heard CB's voice? Because I'm about to be totally jealous.

    CB, you and I ought to have an audio-blog. One word: dangerous.

    Nurse M, thanks so much. I can't wait to write more.

    Cheryl: and I can't wait to see this play out either... it's taking forever.

    Egan: purrrrrr.

    Thanks, Slacker. I'll share more soon!

    By Blogger Jill, At 2/22/2006 09:28:00 PM  

  • Jill - the red danger sign is flashing in my head! Audioblog, a duet of like minds... What a scary thought!

    By Blogger ChickyBabe, At 2/22/2006 10:21:00 PM  

  • Jill props for use of the tractor beam analogy. You had me hooked at the mention of the Falcon. I've been there. I've done that. I've been caught staring and have caught others staring.

    To me the greatest loss is when I cannot go over to talk to those I catch staring. There is nothing sexier than catching someone and watching them turn away and blush. Because if you catch them unguarded, you can see far more than what they want you to see in their eyes.
    The stare, the key to the unguarded soul.

    By Blogger trueborn, At 2/22/2006 10:24:00 PM  

  • CB, we are dangerous enough 10000 miles apart. Can you imagine us as a duet? :)

    Trueborn, as usual, you have bared my soul for me. You see eternity in a moment like that.

    By Blogger Jill, At 2/23/2006 12:37:00 AM  

  • Seconding everyone else's props for the Star Wars reference... and wanting to know when the full play is viewable.

    As to the blush or the unreturned stare, I'm on the opposite side I think. I am more intrigued by the woman who's so confident that when I catch her staring, she keeps right on, as if to say, "all right, you caught me, so are you coming over to do something about it or what?"

    The blush and shyness can be extremely enticing later on (actually, extremely doesn't even come close), but someone who's confident enough to return my stare when I catch her... hubba hubba.

    Funny, I had Resse Witherspoon in my head for Callie. I heard demure Southern Belle where everyone else seems to have picked up English vixen. ;-)

    By Blogger The Chronic Curmudgeon, At 2/23/2006 06:43:00 PM  

  • I'm beginning to think ChickyBabe and JillWrites are the same person. Who's with me?

    By Blogger Egan, At 2/23/2006 08:17:00 PM  

  • CC: You have inspired me to share a scene I wrote a while back. Do give my new post a read. The play will be shared when the play is done. When is that? Your guess is as good as mine. But I'll continue to post excerpts and exercises. Damon and Callie are appreciating the attention.

    Egan: I think she and I are beginning to think we're the same person, too. Imagine how confusing it is for us. ;)

    By Blogger Jill, At 2/23/2006 09:05:00 PM  

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